Sabra Seria Stillyour

[sabra]

Real name: Sabra Seria Stillyour
Alias: Phobia, Seria, Sabe
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Occupation: Mercenary
Personality: She's eccentric. Sometimes, you just can't tell with her. But, NEVER get on her bad side. Things that will get you there: Insult Fox, her Master. He's "dead".(or so everyone thought) And don't insult her Godfather, either. (Sirus Scorpio Riveti) Her rival, Sen Spry, can get her there with just the word "Hi" Don't ever bother her on a mission. She's get ticked about that too. ^^; She just...well...represents me in the Middle Ages ((can be brought to the present if need be))
Physical Appearence: mae-wiseacre.deviantart.com/art/The-Hall-of-Justice-121778088
(She's the only person in the pic!! ^^)
Powers/Abilities: She's a witch. (can use either wand or rhyme) ands skilled withpotion makg.
Weapons: Bow and Arrows. Excellent Marksmen...Marksgirl...^^; She also has a dagger, just in case...and her wand
Weakness: She's afraid of great pain.and losing those she loves most (her godfather!! and Fox)
Allies: well, Hero to those plagued with an evil being. Villain to Villains. Both, I suppose. (She has rules to her Occupation)
History: Was born in the Oak Shire. Has two sisters and a brother. Parents are dead. Godfather mising. Found by Fox and trained by him. Live in a placee called The Realm-a pleace for the "outs". That's about it.
Sample Posts

Sabra: *puts her hands on her hips. is mad* Say that again, Sen Spry, I will kill you...
Seen: Oh? Well...Fox is a no--good---bas--Ahh!!!
Sabra: *jumps on him*

(bit ridiculus, but ok! XD)

[Vlad Plasmius]

Well, it's a decent start.

I like the idea of this character, but I would like to see more in her history and the RP sample. As I stated for the template, there needs to be at least one to two paragraphs for the RP sample and in the rules, I stated no one liners and speaking in third person as if typing out a book.

For weaknesses, is she prone to getting hurt or cut? Can she be hit with certain attacks or whatnot. Add a bit more to her weaknesses as well please.

So all in all, if you can fix up your History and the RP sample, then I'll see about accepting you. ^^

[sabra]

May 9, 2009 18:14:59 GMT -5 Vlad Plasmius said:

Well, it's a decent start.

I like the idea of this character, but I would like to see more in her history and the RP sample. As I stated for the template, there needs to be at least one to two paragraphs for the RP sample and in the rules, I stated no one liners and speaking in third person as if typing out a book.

For weaknesses, is she prone to getting hurt or cut? Can she be hit with certain attacks or whatnot. Add a bit more to her weaknesses as well please.

So all in all, if you can fix up your History and the RP sample, then I'll see about accepting you. ^^

I can do that, but I'll need a little more time. You see, though she is my oldest charrie, all of this is new for her. I'll work on it. Promise!

[Vlad Plasmius]

Alright. I'll give you about 2 weeks. ^^;